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Write a letter to the magazine about the importance of living life to the full. We would like to hear why it is important to live life to the full, how best to archieve this aim and what in your opinion prevents some people from living life to the full.

Write a letter to the magazine about the importance of living life to the full. We would like to hear why it is important to live life to the full, how best to archieve this aim and what in your opinion prevents some people from living life to the full. Xq9bg
Dear editor, I was so pleased when I saw your magazine talking about living life to the full. Lately, I have been through an incredibly hard crisis in my life, my worst nightmares became true in only a few months. But this had made me realise about the importance of living life to the full, because there is only one live. Also discovering my new group of friends who make me so happy had helped me in entering in the lifestyle. At present, I am a student who usually have one of the best marks in the class, however, I also need my social live on weekends. You can accomplish this mentality by YouTube videos about law of attraction or related, by your friends or family and of course, if you need help, don’t hesitate to go to therapy either search for help. Although what best works for me was that one day in summer I got up and I said to myself: “I am always to respond yes to every plan that anyone propose to me”, and that’s what I always do, of course with organisation to prioritise my studies. I understand that there’s people who don’t achieve this goal because they usually think that they need money for this lifestyle or that they don’t have anyone and they are alone. These are false statements; first of all, you don’t need money if you just need to go for a walk, and second of all, you are not alone and if you have any problem with your friends and family try to solve it. Yours faithfully, Lucía Cidoncha
Dear editor,

I was
so
pleased
when I
saw
your magazine talking about living life to the full. Lately, I have been through an
incredibly
hard
crisis in my life, my worst nightmares became true in
only
a few months.
But
this had made me
realise
about the importance of living life to the full,
because
there is
only
one
live
.
Also
discovering my new group of friends who
make
me
so
happy had
helped
me in
entering in the lifestyle
.

At present, I am a student who
usually
have one of the best marks in the
class
,
however
, I
also
need
my social
live
on weekends. You can accomplish this mentality by YouTube videos about law of attraction or related, by your friends or family and
of course
, if you
need
help
, don’t hesitate to go to therapy either search for
help
. Although what best works for me was that one day in summer I
got
up and I said to myself: “I am always to respond yes to every plan that anyone propose to me”, and that’s what I always do,
of course
with
organisation
to
prioritise
my studies.

I understand that there’s
people
who don’t achieve this goal
because
they
usually
think
that they
need
money for this lifestyle or that they don’t have
anyone and
they are alone. These are false statements;
first of all
, you don’t
need
money if you
just
need
to go for a walk, and second of all, you are not alone and if you have any problem with your friends and family try to solve it.

Yours
faithfully
,

Lucía
Cidoncha
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the magazine about the importance of living life to the full. We would like to hear why it is important to live life to the full, how best to archieve this aim and what in your opinion prevents some people from living life to the full.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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