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Complaint letter about you recently bought a new TV set and you discovered that it was damaged and write what you bought and problems

Complaint letter about you recently bought a new TV set and you discovered that it was damaged and write what you bought and problems 8dl1l
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with the problem regarding a Tv set that I recently bought from your shop. On October 23, I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a TV set which is made a brand of samsung. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting necessary information about the product, I made a choice to purchase it. Unfortunately, four days later I felt some defects with it. Though it is a smart model, it has some problems with internet connection. To make matters worse, the remove control of the TV set has a malfunction while it was working. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I demand to exchange the product with the same brand and a new one. I will wait two weeks before turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. Please contact me at the above address. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope of that you can
help
me with the problem regarding a
Tv
set that I recently
bought
from your
shop
. On October 23, I visited one of your local
shops
in order to
buy
a TV set which
is made
a brand of
samsung
. Looking around the
shop
I encountered
expected
item and I asked a
shop
assistant about it. After getting necessary information about the product, I made a choice to
purchase
it. Unfortunately, four days later I felt
some
defects with it. Though it is a smart model, it has
some
problems with internet connection. To
make
matters worse, the remove control of the TV set has a malfunction while it was working. I am looking forward to your reply and resolution of this matter. I demand to exchange the product with the same brand and a new one.
I
will wait two weeks
before
turning to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem.
Please
contact me at the above address. Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Complaint letter about you recently bought a new TV set and you discovered that it was damaged and write what you bought and problems

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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