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Writing a letter for a friend who asked for advice whether to study of work

Writing a letter for a friend who asked for advice whether to study of work 2a1kk
Dear Farid! I got your letter and tried to answer as soon as possible. It’s a pleasure that you asked me to advice you whether to get a job or go to a college. I would like to tell you the advantages and disadvantages of your both alternatives. In long term going to college will provide you better chances of working in well paid positions on the contrary, considering your situation it’s difficult for you to afford living and studying costs. So the best option is to get a job in short term and earn enough money to afford your college expenses. In the city you live in, there are plenty of job opportunities, well paid and with good subsides like restaurant waiters, local guides and construction workers. For example as a waiter in a restaurant, they pay not only a stable salary but also they cover your health insurance and you can earn more money getting tips from clients too. In the end I hope my advice helps you make a good decision. Stay healthy and Safe! See you!
Dear Farid!

I
got
your letter and tried to answer as
soon
as possible. It’s a pleasure that you asked me to advice you whether to
get
a job or go to a college. I would like to
tell
you the advantages and disadvantages of your both alternatives. In long term going to college will provide you better chances of working in well paid positions
on the contrary
, considering your situation it’s difficult for you to afford living and studying costs.
So
the best option is to
get
a job in short term and earn
enough
money to afford your college expenses. In the city you
live
in, there are
plenty
of job opportunities, well paid and with
good
subsides like restaurant waiters, local guides and construction workers.
For example
as a waiter in a restaurant, they pay not
only
a stable salary
but
also
they cover your health insurance and you can earn more money getting tips from clients too. In the
end
I hope my advice
helps
you
make
a
good
decision.

Stay healthy and Safe!

See
you!
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IELTS letter Writing a letter for a friend who asked for advice whether to study of work

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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