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You are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and street

You are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and street L9MbK
Dear sir, My name is Chetna Mangrola. I live in apartment no. 29, fashion street. There was a garden near by my house. It is beautiful and crowded of people all the time. However, I am writing this to complain about the rubbish and litter problem not only on the street but also in my area. Due to the near by park plenty of people are visiting here so that folks are throwing trash and rubbish any where. Owing to this, many diseases are spread our society and also illness, fiver and so on. This waste also attracts numerous insects, which is spread diseases. Moreover, rubbish also polluted an air which disturb us endlessly. I think the council should keep extra garbage on the park and near area. Moreover, they also take a rubbish twice a day. I am also sending a copy of this latter to the local newspaper. Your faithfully, Chetna Mangrola
Dear sir, My name is
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Chetna
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Mangrola
. I
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in apartment no. 29, fashion street. There was a garden
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near by
my
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house
. It is
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beautiful
and crowded of
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people
all the time.
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, I am writing this to complain about the
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rubbish
and litter problem not
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only
on the street
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but
also
in my area. Due to the
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near by
park
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plenty
of
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people
are visiting here
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so
that folks are throwing trash and
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rubbish
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any where
. Owing to this,
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many
diseases
are spread
our society and
also
illness, fiver and
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so
on. This waste
also
attracts numerous insects, which
is spread
diseases.
Moreover
,
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rubbish
also
polluted an air which disturb us
endlessly
. I
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think
the council should
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keep
extra garbage on the park and near area.
Moreover
, they
also
take a
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rubbish
twice a day. I am
also
sending a copy of this latter to the local newspaper.
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Your
faithfully
,
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Chetna
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Mangrola

IELTS letter You are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and street

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