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Imagine you stayed in an unusual place when you went on holiday. Write a letter to a friend.

Imagine you stayed in an unusual place when you went on holiday. Write a letter to a friend. 9lOwx
Dear Helen, You'll never guess where I went on holiday last month! My friends and I decided to experience something unusual, so we chose to stay in a place called Prison Hotel. It is an old naval jail situated in Korosta. It used to be a prison for Russian sailors and political prisoners. The receptionist was a former prison guard, and he even had a gun! Scary, isn't it? The place was cold and dark, the food disgusting and the beds uncomfortable. My whole body is still aching. But, for ten euros per night we couldn't expect more. Though it was a unique experience, we will definitely choose an ordinary place to stay next time! Anyway, I must go and get on with my work. Best wishes, Paul
Dear Helen,

You'll never guess where I went on holiday last month!

My friends and I decided to experience something unusual,
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so
we chose to stay in a place called Prison Hotel. It is an
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old
naval jail situated in
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Korosta
. It
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used
to be a prison for Russian sailors and political prisoners. The receptionist was a former prison guard, and he even had a gun! Scary, isn't it?

The place was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
and dark, the food disgusting and the beds uncomfortable. My whole body is
still
aching.
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But
, for ten euros per night we couldn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
more. Though it was a unique experience, we will definitely choose an ordinary place to stay
next
time!

Anyway, I
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must
go and
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get
on with my work.

Best wishes,

Paul
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IELTS letter Imagine you stayed in an unusual place when you went on holiday. Write a letter to a friend.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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