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Write a letter to your friend who is visiting you, but you are unable to receive and attend him on arrival day.

Write a letter to your friend who is visiting you, but you are unable to receive and attend him on arrival day. m9NRn
I am all excited to know that you will be visiting me next week. I cannot wait to make it worth all the difficulties you have faced to make it work. However, I feel sorry to let you know that I might not be available to pick you up from the airport. Initially I wanted to be there with you from the time you land here in Michigan but, my manager insisted that I should attend a few business meetings that might be crucial for our business development in the coming years. After knowing the importance of this I couldn't decline his meeting invitation. Having said that, I also did not want to disappoint my friend who is visiting me for the first time so, I asked my sister Julie, who is also your friend, to pick you up from the airport and accompany you till the time I join. She will drive you to your accommodation and take you to one of the local restaurants to try some authentic food Just in case you need any help in my absence do not hesitate to call Julie anytime. She just lives across the street and we will be able to help you instantly. With love and respect. Your friend, Harsha
I am all excited to know that you will be visiting me
next
week. I cannot wait to
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make
it worth all the difficulties you have faced to
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make
it work.
However
, I feel sorry to
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let
you know that I might not be available to pick you up from the airport.

Initially
I wanted to be there with you from the time you land here in Michigan
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but
, my manager insisted that I should attend a few business meetings that might be crucial for our business development in the coming years.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
knowing the importance of this I couldn't decline his meeting invitation.

Having said that, I
also
did not want to disappoint my friend who is visiting me for the
first
time
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so
, I asked my sister Julie, who is
also
your friend, to pick you up from the airport and accompany you till the time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
. She will drive you to your accommodation and take you to one of the local restaurants to try
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
authentic food

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Just
in case you need any
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help
in my absence do not hesitate to call Julie anytime. She
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
across the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
street and
we will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
instantly
.

With
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love
and respect. Your friend,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Harsha
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is visiting you, but you are unable to receive and attend him on arrival day.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
209 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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