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Letter of complaint about the item that you purchase online

Letter of complaint about the item that you purchase online 0lOpG
Dear the manager of Lilie boutique, I’m writing to complain about a blouse I purchased online from your shop last week. Although, I ordered small size which supposed to fit me well, it turned out too baggy. Moreover, there is a dirt on the sleeve. I had to pay a lot of money in advance expecting to own high quality product. due to the fact that it did not meet my expectation, I refused the package right after a shipper delivered it. However, he told me he was not in charge of this problem and advised me to contact with the shop. After that, I messaged on your page and I sent it back because one of your staff assured that I would be send a refund. However, until now, I have not received it. As a regular customer of yours, I’m very disappointed with the item I purchased this time and the unprofessional service this time. I hope this matter will be solved as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Mai
Dear the manager of
Lilie
boutique,

I’m writing to complain about a blouse I
purchased
online from your shop last week.

Although, I ordered
small
size which supposed to fit me well, it turned out too baggy.
Moreover
, there is a dirt on the sleeve. I had to pay
a lot of
money in advance expecting to
own
high quality product.
due
to the fact that it did not
meet
my expectation, I refused the package right after a shipper delivered it.
However
, he
told
me he was not in charge of this problem and advised me to contact with the shop.

After that, I messaged on your page and I
sent
it back
because
one of your staff assured that I would be
send
a refund.
However
, until
now
, I have not received it.

As a regular customer of yours, I’m
very
disappointed with the item I
purchased
this time and the unprofessional service this time. I hope this matter will
be solved
as
soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mai
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IELTS letter Letter of complaint about the item that you purchase online

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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