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Writing a letter for a friend about the new fast-food restaurant in the town

Writing a letter for a friend about the new fast-food restaurant in the town XqWN8
Dear Andrew, Long time no see, how's your summer? Did you visit anywhere with your family? By the way, did you visit the fast-food restaurant just opened recently? I have visited there, and it's quite good, we can go there this weekend after a long summer. As I said, I tried that new restaurant already. It located in the heart of the town, just directly to the right of the park. I had read the news about that place on the morning, so I had planned to eat there after my piano class on Thursday. From my piano class, which is near to your house, to the restaurant is about ten minutes if we go by bus, so it's kind of convenient for you to go and meet me on Saturday. When I went there, I was surprised by the atmosphere, it was crowded, but the people there aren't noisy, sound different from the fast-food restaurant that I imagined. The restaurant was designed in modern style, like a café than a fast-food place. Because it's near to the park, so they even designed an outdoor place to eat, and I felt near to the nature when I was sitting there though. The most important thing is the food, because if the place is beautiful but the food's quality is bad, I will skip it. When I looked at the menu, the dishes are diversified. I ordered a coke and chicken wings. The chicken wings were good, and it very suits with the sauce. I had said to them that don't put too much ice in it, and they even did that for me. For me, the quality and service is pretty good, but it was inexpensive though. So I was satisfied. See you soon! Sincerely, Tina
Dear Andrew,

Long time no
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, how's your summer? Did you visit anywhere with your family? By the way, did you visit the
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fast
-food
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restaurant
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just
opened recently? I have visited there, and it's quite
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good
, we can go there this weekend after a long summer.

As I said, I tried that new
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restaurant
already. It located in the heart of the town,
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just
directly
to the right of the park. I had read the news about that
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place
on the morning,
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I had planned to eat there after my piano
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class
on Thursday. From my piano
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class
, which is near to your
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house
, to the
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restaurant
is about ten minutes if we go by bus,
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so
it's kind of convenient for you to go and
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meet
me on Saturday.

When I went there, I
was surprised
by the atmosphere, it
was crowded
,
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but
the
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people
there aren't noisy, sound
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different
from the
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fast
-food
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restaurant
that I imagined. The
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restaurant
was designed
in modern style, like a café than a
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fast
-food
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place
.
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Because
it's near to the park,
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so
they even designed an outdoor
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place
to eat, and I felt near to the nature when I was sitting there though.

The most
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important
thing is the food,
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because
if the
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place
is
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beautiful
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but
the food's quality is
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bad
, I will skip it. When I looked at the menu, the dishes
are diversified
. I ordered a coke and chicken wings. The chicken wings were
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good
, and it
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very
suits with the sauce. I had said to them that don't put too much ice in it, and they even did that for me. For me, the quality and service is pretty
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good
,
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but
it was inexpensive though.
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So
I
was satisfied
.
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See
you
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soon
!

Sincerely
, Tina
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IELTS letter Writing a letter for a friend about the new fast-food restaurant in the town

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  American English
6 paragraphs
295 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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