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Describe a meal at a restaurant that you had a bad experience

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Dear Sir/Madam I recently went to your restaurant for dinner and I was disappointed in the food, the staff and the service. -I looked at the prices when I was at home but when I arrived, the prices in the menu were different. -In the advertisement, your restaurant food looks delicious. Actually, when I experienced it, I felt that the food was very bad from the main course to the dessert, although this is a Korean restaurant, the food is not spicy at all. -And lastly, the staff looks very moody, they serve very slowly, even have an angry attitude. I tried to be friendly and polite to them but maybe they just didn't care. This is the worst experience I have ever had. I voted one star for your restaurant facebook fan page experience and I would like a refund for the meal. I looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Mary
Dear Sir/Madam

I recently went to your
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restaurant
for
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dinner and
I
was disappointed
in the
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food
, the staff and the service.

-I looked at the prices when I was at home
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but
when I arrived, the prices in the menu were
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different
.

-In the advertisement, your
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restaurant
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food
looks delicious. Actually, when I experienced it, I felt that the
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food
was
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very
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bad
from the main course to the dessert, although this is a Korean
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restaurant
, the
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food
is not spicy at all.

-And
lastly
, the staff looks
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very
moody, they serve
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very
slowly
, even have an angry attitude.

I tried to be friendly and polite to them
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but
maybe they
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just
didn't care. This is the worst experience I have ever had.

I voted one star for your
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restaurant
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facebook
fan page experience and I would like a refund for the meal.

Did you mean "I'm looking", "I am looking", or "I was looking"?
I looking
forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mary
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IELTS letter Describe a meal at a restaurant that you had a bad experience

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  American English
9 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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