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Hi Zara, How’s it going? I hope you are doing well. I would to say that my family is visiting London next month. I would love to meet you while I was there. My family is going to stay in London for one week from 21th-27th December. Can we meet each other on 23th December at Central Park at 9 am? At there, we can take out pictures, hang out together, eat some ice cream or maybe find some museum around there I really want to go to London’s museum once, what do you think? I really hope to hear from you soon. All my love,
Hi Zara,

How’s it going? I hope you are doing well. I would to say that my family is visiting London
next
month.
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would
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meet
you while I was there. My family is going to stay in London for one week from
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21th
-27th December. Can we
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meet
each other on
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23th
December at Central Park at 9 am? At there, we can take out pictures, hang out together, eat
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some
ice cream or maybe find
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some
museum around there I
really
want to go to London’s museum once, what do you
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I
really
hope to hear from you
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soon
.

All my
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,
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IELTS letter write an email to your pen pal

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  American English
4 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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