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You share your room but it is not suitable arrangement for you

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Dear Sir /Madam I am Iroda Isroilova who studies at Namangan state University. And I am writing to you in order to hand me for some troubles with my accommodation. First and foremost, I am so grateful for catering me with accommodation. But I am hopeless about my roommates. They make deafening noise and do not really pay attention their education at University. Not only this, but also they leave their staffs untidy which makes me so angry as well. I would like to being facilitate this problem by taking the much more convinient way. As it is not just allegation by me, please take it seriously. Yours faithfully Iroda Isroilova
Dear Sir /Madam

I am
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Iroda
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Isroilova
who studies at
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Namangan
state University. And I am writing to you in order to hand me for
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some
troubles with my accommodation.

First
and foremost, I am
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so
grateful for catering me with accommodation.
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But
I am hopeless about my roommates. They
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make
deafening noise and do not
really
pay attention their education at University. Not
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only
this,
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but
also
they
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leave
their staffs untidy which
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makes
me
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so
angry
as well
.

I would like to being
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facilitate
this problem by taking the much more
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convinient
way. As it is not
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just
allegation by me,
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please
take it
seriously
.

Yours
faithfully


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Iroda
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Isroilova
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IELTS letter You share your room but it is not suitable arrangement for you

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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