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Write a letter to the municipal corporation for the water shortage in your area

Write a letter to the municipal corporation for the water shortage in your area dlPR6
ToThe OfficerMunicipal corporationDhariwal, Distt GSub: Complaint for water shortageRespected Sir/MadamI want to let you know the current condition of our area due to shortage of water. Due to lack of water all the household work suffer because of scarcity of water. So on the behalf of our area I request you to please resolve this issue as soon as possible. Only after that all the people of our area will be free from all worries because without water all the work suffer drastically. I hope that you understand our problem and try to solve it on urgent basis. Yours faithfullyAlkaModel townDhariwal
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OfficerMunicipal
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: Complaint for
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water
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shortageRespected
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want to
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condition of our area due to shortage of
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water
. Due to lack of
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water
all the household work suffer
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because
of scarcity of
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water
.
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So
on the behalf of our area I request you to
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please
resolve this issue as
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soon
as possible.
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after that all the
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people
of our area will be free from all worries
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without
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water
all the work suffer
drastically
. I hope that you understand our problem and try to solve it on urgent basis. Yours
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faithfullyAlkaModel
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townDhariwal
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the municipal corporation for the water shortage in your area

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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