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Write to an application to get a job in foriegn country LbpP6
Dear Mr John I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher at the College of Fine Art which is located in the north of London, as advertised on this city's careers web page. I have included my resume for your consideration. Moreover to experience as an English teacher, l have an excellent knowledge of teaching students and I hold 8 band score certificate from Ielts. Most recently, I have worked at the School of Stetson for 10 years. While I was there, I developed a teaching program for young learners. However, I had to leave my job due to a move to your city. I am hard- working, organized and patient and work well under pressure. As my references show, I have been enough qualification how to teach students. Thank you for your time and consideration. I will follow up next week to see if I can offer any more information about my skills and experience. My cell phone is 4566567 and my email is jane@. com. Yours sincerely Jane Jekson
Dear Mr John

I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher at the College of Fine Art which
is located
in the north of London, as advertised on this city's careers web page. I have included my resume for your consideration.

Moreover
to experience as an English teacher, l have an excellent knowledge of teaching students and I hold 8 band score certificate from
Ielts
. Most recently, I have worked at the School of Stetson for 10 years. While I was there, I developed a teaching program for young learners.
However
, I had to
leave
my job due to a
move
to your city.

I am
hard
- working, organized and patient and work well under pressure. As my references
show
, I have been
enough
qualification how to teach students.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I will follow up
next
week to
see
if I can offer any more information about my
skills
and experience. My cell phone is 4566567 and my email is
jane@
.
com
.

Yours
sincerely


Jane
Jekson
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IELTS letter Write to an application to get a job in foriegn country

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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