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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a position of English Teacher at the President school in Tashkent city which was advertised in Monday's edition of the Time's News. I am an outgoing person with lotd of energy and a great sense of tun and adventure. I show dedication and a high level of responsibility in everything I do and am known for being very realible. Furthermore, I am confident working on my own, but equally enjoy being part of a team. I have many relevant skills to offer that this year I have had C1 level of CEFR examination for my high knowledge. Moreover, I worked as English trainer for our region's teachers. What is more I taught students to take IELTS levels at trainig centres. I have recently moved to this city centry because of my husband's job. I need fool time job. I thank you for your consideration and look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Anna Johson.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for a position of English Teacher at the President school in Tashkent city which
was advertised
in Monday's edition of the Time's News.

I am an outgoing person with
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lotd
of energy and a great sense of tun and adventure.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
dedication and a high level of responsibility in everything I do and
am known
for being
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very
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realible
.
Furthermore
, I am confident working on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
equally
enjoy being part of a team.

I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
relevant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to offer that this year I have had C1 level of CEFR examination for my high knowledge.
Moreover
, I worked as English trainer for our region's teachers.
What is more
I taught students to take IELTS levels at
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trainig
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centres
.

I have recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to this city
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centry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my husband's job. I need fool time job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
thank you for your consideration and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Anna
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Johson
.
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IELTS letter You are writing to apply for a job to school

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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