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Writing a covering letter for a summer job working as a restaurant manager.

Writing a covering letter for a summer job working as a restaurant manager. gWo7a
I was thrilled to discover your job posting for a restaurant manager and am excited to be applying for the position. My experience in the restaurant industry, formidable management skills, business acumen, and dynamic nature make me a perfect fit for the job. I believe I would be a valuable addition to your team. I am passionate about creating great dining experiences and excel in training and managing teams to deliver excellent customer service. Several years of experience as a restaurant manager have allowed me to develop a broad skill set, from excellent customer service and people management skills to strong budgeting, business development, and marketing skills. I am excited to be applying for this position with you and for the opportunity to apply my know-how, positive energy, and restaurant management abilities to oversee the efficient running of your restaurant, increase profitability, and ensure staff and customer satisfaction. I would feel privileged to be a member of your team. Please find attached my resume that contains a detailed account of my education, experience, and competencies. Feel free to contact me directly should you require anything further. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you to discuss this position in more detail. Sincerely,
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was thrilled
to discover your job posting for a
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restaurant
manager and
am excited
to be applying for the position. My
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experience
in the
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restaurant
industry, formidable management
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skills
, business acumen, and dynamic nature
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make
me a perfect fit for the job. I believe I would be a valuable addition to your team.

I am passionate about creating great dining
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experiences
and excel in training and managing teams to deliver excellent customer service. Several years of
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experience
as a
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restaurant
manager have
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allowed
me to develop a broad
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skill
set, from excellent customer service and
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people
management
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skills
to strong budgeting, business development, and marketing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

I
am excited
to be applying for this position with you and for the opportunity to apply my know-how,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
energy, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
management abilities to oversee the efficient running of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
, increase profitability, and ensure staff and customer satisfaction. I would feel privileged to be a member of your team.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
find attached my resume that contains a detailed account of my education,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
, and competencies. Feel free to contact me
directly
should you require anything
further
.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you to discuss this position in more detail.

Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Writing a covering letter for a summer job working as a restaurant manager.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
208 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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