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TAKING RISK OR PLAYING IT SAFE

TAKING RISK OR PLAYING IT SAFE Bwp3a
Hi! Sana again. Today I’mma share with an interesting thing, and you gotta be amazed by it, so stay there and listen to me carefully. There is somebody who has said that “When you are in a challenge, if you withdraw, you lose; If you fight for it, you win regardless of what actual results are”. So what does it mean? If you were in that situation, what would you do? Were I you, I would face up and try to find out what color makes this challenge so attractive. Why? Stay tuned, I’ll tell you the reason. Success in life sometimes just comes from taking risks or chances, not the careful planning. Therefore, if you play them too safe, you will lose your promoting and developing opportunity in life. But what if we get failure? That’s okay, that failure doesn’t hurt. In embracing failure, you understand that the best way to learn what’s possible is to take risks. Everyone has fears and at some point, we will all have to face our fears so that we can overcome them and get back the experience, knowledge, and confidence. Then, that gives people more opportunities to reach the success. (Like a baby boy, he wants to move and has started by pulling himself up any way he can. He has failed repeatedly, using a body that he can’t yet fully control. Eventually he learned a better way. Likewise, you ought to take risks to discover the limit of yourself. ) Nevertheless, when I say like that, there will be somebody telling me that careful planning does help a person analyze his goal more deeply and make realistic goals. Taking chances, from the other hand, does not give the opportunity to clearly understand a goal. What do you think? Somehow it’s true. But don’t you know that “Without risk, there’s no reward”, do you? But instead of taking it casually, we should take calculated risk to play it safe! That sounds strange, right? I believe that taking risk is a part of life as after that, the best possible solution will present itself. I’m not afraid of taking risk; I just make sure that I have considered all the facts and possible outcomes my decision will have. You play it safe cuz you’re afraid of failing. But don’t you know playing it too safe is the best “key” to be failed, do you? Mark Zuckerberg once said: “The biggest risk is not taking any risks” Remember If your goal is NOT to fail, you will always play it safe, you won’t take risks, as a result you CAN NEVER WIN BIG. Simple as that. Thank you for your listening. If you have any comments or questions, be free to tell me in the comment box. Goodbye!
Hi! Sana again.
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share with an interesting thing, and you
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be amazed
by it,
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stay there and listen to me
carefully
.

There is somebody who has said that “When you are in a challenge, if you withdraw, you lose; If you fight for it, you win regardless of what actual results are”.
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So
what does it mean? If you were in that situation, what would you do? Were I you, I would face up and try to find out what color
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makes
this challenge
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so
attractive. Why? Stay tuned, I’ll
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tell
you the reason.

Success in life
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sometimes
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just
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comes
from taking
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risks
or chances, not the careful planning.
Therefore
, if you
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play
them too
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safe
, you will lose your promoting and developing opportunity in life.
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But
what if we
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get
failure? That’s okay, that failure doesn’t hurt. In embracing failure, you understand that the best way to learn what’s possible is to take
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risks
. Everyone has fears and at
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some
point, we will all
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have to
face our fears
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so
that we can overcome them and
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get
back the experience, knowledge, and confidence. Then, that gives
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people
more opportunities to reach the success. (Like a baby boy, he wants to
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move
and has
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started
by pulling himself up any way he can. He has failed
repeatedly
, using a body that he can’t
yet
fully
control.
Eventually
he learned a better way.
Likewise
, you ought to take
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the limit of yourself.
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Nevertheless
, when I say like that, there will be somebody telling me that careful planning does
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help
a person analyze his
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goal
more
deeply
and
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make
realistic
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goals
. Taking chances, from the other hand, does not give the opportunity to
clearly
understand a
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goal
. What do you
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think
? Somehow it’s true.
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But
don’t you know that “Without
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risk
, there’s no reward”, do you?
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But
instead
of taking it
casually
, we should take calculated
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risk
to
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play
it
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safe
! That sounds strange, right? I believe that taking
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risk
is a part of life as after that, the best possible solution will present itself. I’m not afraid of taking
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risk
; I
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just
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make
sure that I have considered all the facts and possible outcomes my decision will have. You
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play
it
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safe
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cuz
you’re afraid of failing.
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But
don’t you know playing it too
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safe
is the best “key” to
be failed
, do you?

Mark Zuckerberg once said: “The biggest
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risk
is not taking any
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risks”
Remember If your
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goal
is NOT to fail, you will always
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play
it
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safe
, you won’t take
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risks
,
as a result
you CAN NEVER WIN
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BIG
. Simple as that. Thank you for your listening. If you have any comments or questions, be free to
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tell
me in the comment box. Goodbye!
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IELTS letter TAKING RISK OR PLAYING IT SAFE

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4 paragraphs
464 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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