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25 th anniversiry of business.manager asked workers to give advice.you should offer also help

25 th anniversiry of business. manager asked workers to give advice. you should offer also help 1ANqq

Dear sir/madamI am writing to you to suggest some advice regarding the 25 th anniversiry of our company. I have been working here for 5 years and i feel very excited about the celebration ceremony. First of all, i would like to advice you about the ceremony place, it would be nice to be held outside in the garden of our building. The weather is anounced to be perfect next weekends. Secondly, i would like to offer my help. as you know i am on holidays now and i have got plenty of time. I can cook several meals or bring the necessary equipment for the ceremony. I look forward to hearing from you soonYours sincerely, tea ch

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 writing to you to suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 advice regarding the Did you mean "25th"?25th
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anniversiry
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. I have been working here for 5 years and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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very
 excited about the celebration ceremony. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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 would like to advice you about the ceremony place, it would be nice to be held
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 would like to offer my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 you know Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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