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Renting an apartment from an agency.

Renting an apartment from an agency. JwDBk
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Eshan Chawla and I rented an apartment through your agency in the Seven Lamps society of sector 82 last year in October 2020. The contract was registered in my name and is due to expire 3 months from now. As per the terms and conditions, I had paid an year's rent in advance at the time of renting this place. However, due to unforseen circumstances, I will have to vacate this flat next month. This is because my organization requires me to move to Chennai and work from there due to project requirements. I hereby request you to please get the needful done to end the agreement. Also, it would be really grateful if you can consider my situation and refund the extra rend paid. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards Eshan
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Eshan
Chawla
and I rented an apartment through your agency in the Seven Lamps society of sector 82 last year in October 2020. The contract
was registered
in my name and is due to expire 3 months from
now
.

As per the terms and conditions, I had paid
an
year's rent in advance at the time of renting this place.
However
, due to
unforseen
circumstances, I will
have to
vacate this flat
next
month. This is
because
my organization requires me to
move
to Chennai and work from there due to project requirements. I hereby request you to
please
get
the needful done to
end
the agreement.
Also
, it would be
really
grateful if you can consider my situation and refund the extra rend paid. Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Regards

Eshan
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IELTS letter Renting an apartment from an agency.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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