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A letter asking for a job vaccancy

Aslam o alikum ma'am I hope you are in best of your health. It took me a month to write to you, as per your knowledge I'm Anita I have done MS(CSIT) enroll in 2015 You were basically my supervisor and great supporter in completing my ISP(Independent Study Project). I can think of nowhere else to ask for help as to where can i apply for a job (as a teaching faculty). Maybe you can guide me more where do i start, what should i study as i have no prior experience. I am looking forward to your positive feedback, hope this wouldn't take much of your time. I would never have a courage to write this matter if it weren't for you. Thanks in anticipation Anita
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I hope you are in best of your health. It took me a month to write to you, as per your knowledge I'm Anita I have done MS(
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CSIT
) enroll in 2015

You were
basically
my supervisor and great supporter in completing my ISP(Independent Study Project). I can
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think
of nowhere else to
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ask for
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help
as to where can
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i
apply for a job (as a teaching faculty). Maybe you can guide me more where do
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i
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start
, what should
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
study as
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i
have no prior experience.

I am looking forward to your
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positive
feedback, hope this wouldn't take much of your time. I would never have a courage to write this matter if it weren't for you.

Thanks in anticipation

Anita
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IELTS letter A letter asking for a job vaccancy

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
126 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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