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A letter asking for a job vaccancy

Aslam o alikum ma'am I hope you are in best of your health. It took me a month to write to you, as per your knowledge I'm Anita I have done MS(CSIT) enroll in 2015 You were basically my supervisor and great supporter in completing my ISP(Independent Study Project). I can think of nowhere else to ask for help as to where can i apply for a job (as a teaching faculty). Maybe you can guide me more where do i start, what should i study as i have no prior experience. I am looking forward to your positive feedback, hope this wouldn't take much of your time. I would never have a courage to write this matter if it weren't for you. Thanks in anticipation Anita

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IELTS letter A letter asking for a job vaccancy

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

126 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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