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I’m planning to visit your city next month and I’m really excited about the trip. Can you suggest somewhere to stay and tell me a little about what I can do in your hometown. What clothes should I bring?

I’m planning to visit your city next month and I’m really excited about the trip. Can you suggest somewhere to stay and tell me a little about what I can do in your hometown. What clothes should I bring? G981w
Dear Ann, I am deeply sorry for not replying you soon as I have been having my hands full with the assignment, whose deadline was on yesterday. I am glad to hear that you are going to Ho Chi Minh City for holiday. It’s jaw-dropping but so exciting. I told this to my parents and they are over the moon to accommodate you to stay in a lovely empty room in my house. There are various places of interest for you to pay visits to such as the Reunification Palace, Botanical Garden, Dam Sen Park… You may be surprised and absorbed in the beauty and glamour of these places. Concerning the clothes you should wear, I think the weather here is quite hot, so it is a good idea to put on casual clothes like shirts, simple pants or skirts. I hope you will have a good time in my hometown and my family always welcome you. All the best, Tony
Dear Ann,

I am
deeply
sorry for not replying you
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soon
as I have been having my hands
The usual collocation for "full" is "of" not "with". Did you mean "full of"?
full with
the assignment, whose deadline was on yesterday.

I am glad to hear that you are going to Ho Chi Minh City for holiday. It’s jaw-dropping
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
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so
exciting. I
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told
this to my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
parents and
they are over the moon to accommodate you to stay in a lovely empty room in my
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house
. There are various places of interest for you to pay visits to such as the Reunification Palace, Botanical Garden, Dam Sen Park… You may
be surprised
and absorbed in the beauty and glamour of these places.

Concerning the clothes you should wear, I
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think
the weather here is quite hot,
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so
it is a
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good
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idea
to put on casual clothes like shirts, simple pants or skirts.

I hope you will have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time in my hometown and my family always welcome you.

All the best,

Tony
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IELTS letter I’m planning to visit your city next month and I’m really excited about the trip. Can you suggest somewhere to stay and tell me a little about what I can do in your hometown. What clothes should I bring?

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