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Dear Mrs. Barret, I hope you are doing well, I am Dispenaa living in your area last one year, I came to know regarding your advertise that you are in need of somebody who can help you some hours in next summer. I am a international student studying in Kingadward university, I am available during weekends and also in evening from 5pm to 8pm, I am a good cook as I have a experience back in country to worked in a hotel as a cook, Moreover cookery in my passion, I love to cook for other people different cuisine, I thinks I can help you much better than a person don't have cookery experience. Also I will help you in your other house chores what all you wants me to do. It will help me as well as I am looking for some part time job. I look forward to hearing from you soon. please do not hesitate to call me Yours faithfully, Despina
Dear Mrs.
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Barret
,

I hope you are doing well, I am
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Dispenaa
living in your area last one year, I came to know regarding your
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advertise
that you are in need of somebody who can
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help
you
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some
hours in
next
summer.

I am
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a
international student studying in
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Kingadward
university, I am available during weekends and
also
in evening from 5pm to 8pm, I am a
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good
cook as I have
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a
experience back in country to worked in a hotel as a cook,
Moreover
cookery in my passion, I
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love
to cook for other
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people
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different
cuisine, I
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "think"
thinks
I can
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help
you much better than a person don't have cookery experience.

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Also
I will
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help
you in your other
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house
chores what all you
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wants
me to do. It will
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help
me
as well
as I am looking for
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some
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
job.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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please
do not hesitate to call
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me


Yours
faithfully
,

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Despina
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IELTS letter write a letter to mrs barret an english speaking woman in your area

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7 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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