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write a letter to mrs barret an english speaking woman in your area

write a letter to mrs barret an english speaking woman in your area m3ryq

Dear Mrs. Barret, I hope you are doing well, I am Dispenaa living in your area last one year, I came to know regarding your advertise that you are in need of somebody who can help you some hours in next summer. I am a international student studying in Kingadward university, I am available during weekends and also in evening from 5pm to 8pm, I am a good cook as I have a experience back in country to worked in a hotel as a cook, Moreover cookery in my passion, I love to cook for other people different cuisine, I thinks I can help you much better than a person don't have cookery experience. Also I will help you in your other house chores what all you wants me to do. It will help me as well as I am looking for some part time job. I look forward to hearing from you soon. please do not hesitate to call me Yours faithfully, Despina

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,

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Dispenaa
 living in your area last one year, I came to know regarding your The word 'advertise' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "advertisement"?advertisement
advertise
 that you are in need of somebody who can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hours in next
 summer.

I am Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 international student studying in Possible spelling mistake found.Windward
Kingadward
 university, I am available during weekends and also
 in evening from 5pm to 8pm, I am a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cook as I have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 experience back in country to worked in a hotel as a cook, Moreover
 cookery in my passion, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to cook for other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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different
 cuisine, I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "think"think
thinks
 I can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you much better than a person don't have cookery experience.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you in your other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 chores what all you The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "want"want
wants
 me to do. It will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 me as well
 as I am looking for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
 do not hesitate to call Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphme.me!me?me:me,me;
me


Yours faithfully
,

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Despina