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Dear Professor Keith Please accept this letter as an application for the ALRS-PHD program at the University of Arizona. I would like to express my motivation which persuaded me to apply for this program.

Dear Professor Keith Please accept this letter as an application for the ALRS-PHD program at the University of Arizona. I would like to express my motivation which persuaded me to apply for this program. 5aK6V

I graduated from Shiraz University in master’s program in landscape architecture, which was completed on November 27, 2019, and my GPA is 18. 27 out of 20. 00, and the University of Shiraz rewarded and certified my M. A. as the top student. I defended my thesis on “Dry landscape (Ecological Restoration the Shiraz Khoshk River)” which was an ecological urban regeneration in dry lands. It was studied in 4 separate chapters, Geographical, Environmental, and Landscape Design, and finally led to the proposed design sample and an ISI article. During my education I studied a lot about the Persian garden and the European landscape, which led me to a study of the Persian garden under Prof. Sheibani supervision as a research. Also I participated in research on English garden in collaboration with Prof. L, Etezadi which led me to presenting a lecture on it in 2018, and an article on gardening England was under the supervision of her (rewriting after arbitration). I need to do this project under the supervision of someone who has professional support and knowledge in the field of climate change and the urban environment in arid areas, and furtunatlly I have read some of your articles, in which environmental, social and health concerns are quite evident in your urban planning perspective. I should say studying arid landscapes as one of the most challenging sights, and urban gardens led me to research in blue and green urban spaces and smart systems which can put arid and semi-arid cities to new sustainable landscape models (Smart-Sustainable Design to combat with climate change in the arid urban landscape) to address climate change and improve interaction between people and environment. So I believe that I can contribute to this position, its goals and future in your outstanding mission. I hope you will give me the privilege of joining the program. Thank you for your time and consideration. I attached my CV. and professors' recommendations to ensure that I am reliable for your program at University. Thank you for taking the time to read. I look forward to hearing from you.

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I attached my CV. and professors' recommendations to ensure that I am reliable for your program at University. Thank you for taking the time to read. I look forward to hearing from you. 