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letter of a application to the tourism office for local tour guide

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Dear sir, I'm writing for your advertisement that was about a tour guide position in your website. I've lived in this town since I was a child. Also I've been really interested in researching about history of the town that I am living in. On the other hand my major at university was the history of Iran so I think it satisfies your requirements. I've read a lot of books about history and attractions of my town and also I can introduce sightseeing in the best way to the tourists. I've been teaching the history at school all day week and I have time for being a local tour guide at the weekends. I do hope you'll consider me for this position, and I look forward for hearing from you. Best regardsjasmine

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