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Write an online posting about your parents are too busy and they don't have any time with you

Write an online posting about your parents are too busy and they don't have any time with you x8GBw

Re: my parents are too busy. By: Thy >> Tuesday, October 26th, 2021 at 11: 00 P. M Current mood: I am so sad and lonely. I'm at a loss on what to do next. Even on weekdays, my parents are constantly busy with a rigorous schedule from morning until midnight. I have a lot of secrets I want to share with them, but my father and mother always say things like "I'm too busy with my work" or "Go out and study and let me concentrate on my work. " I'm completely alone. However, the event began two days ago, on Sunday, when I was looking forward to going on a trip with my parents. My father received a message to meet with his partner and then go to his firm just as we were getting ready to leave the house. When the trip was canceled, I was devastated. I cried the entire day. To me, everything happened as though it were a joke. I wish my parents could spend more time with me and their family and we could have happy moments together.

Re: my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 are too busy.

By: Thy >> Tuesday, October 26th, 2021 at 11: 00 P. M

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Current
 mood: I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sad and lonely.

I'm at a loss on what to do next
. Even on weekdays, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 are constantly
 busy with a rigorous schedule from morning until midnight. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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but
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I'm too busy with my workUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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 or Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Go out and study and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me concentrate on my work. Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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 I'm completely alone. However
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 began two days ago, on Sunday, when I was looking forward to going on a trip with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
. My father received a message to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with his partner and then go to his firm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 as we were getting ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

When the trip was canceled
, I was devastated
. I cried the entire day. To me, everything happened as though it were a joke.

I wish my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 could spend more time with me and their Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).family, and
family and
 we could have happy moments together. 