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Dear Sir/Madam; I am writing you apply for the job vacancy as an Electronics Engineer, which was advertised in Manila Bulleting last January 15, 2020. I am particularly interested for the position because your requirements match with my work experiences and interest. As you can see in my CV, I have more than ten years combined professional experiences as an Electronics Engineer in an Electronics and Semiconductor company. I was an Electronics Test Engineer in an electronics manufacturing company for four years, and I was responsible in making sure that all company products is functioning before turning it over to our customers. Currently, I am employed as an Electronics Engineer at Philips Electronics, where I am designing and assembling new electronics products. I am really interested in joining your company and be a part of your growth. My expertise, dedication and passion in electronics engineering will make a huge contribution in your company success. My curriculum vitae are attached as a reference for my qualifications. I am ready for an interview at your most convenient time. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Noel T. Baltazar

Dear Sir/Madam;

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 at Philips Electronics, where I am designing and assembling new electronics products.

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My curriculum vitae are attached
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
 yours,

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