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letter for friend invite her to go to watch sport games

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Hi Ana, I’m so glad to hear from you. I’m sorry that I haven’t written to you for ages. Thank you very much for your invitation. I’d love to enjoy a basketball match on July 5th. . As you know that I’m a super fan of basketball. I haven’t missed any big seasons especially NBA or Saigon Heat. To be honest, I’ve never been to any of sports games, so I don’t know much about them. I usually watch sports on TV, but that’s not as exciting for me as being an audience. I will wildly both shout and clap to support the players. Furthermore, we can try the new Asian buffet restaurants after the match. They are getting well-known for their Chinese, Vietnamese and Thai cuisines. Have you ever tried Asian foods before? I’m sure its flavor will be rich and tasty. Also, they are pretty affordable. One more thing, as a special treat, I’ll cook a huge dinner for your family. I’m really excited about our upcoming date. By the way, is there anything I should prepare for the event? Feel free to email or phone me if there is any change. All the best, Ngo Phuong Thuy

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All the best,

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