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You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you didn't attend Say what you will do to make up for it.

You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you didn't attend Say what you will do to make up for it. 3aWgw
Dear Mrs Zuhra Abdukarimova I am writing to apologize for not being able to participate in the process of explaining a new theme yesterday. I am terribly sorry for missing the most necessary and important lecture. I really wanted to attend the class. But unfortunately, I couldn’t participate in the class for some reasons. The reason I couldn’t attend the class was that we had to go to the hospital because we had all family illness. I couldn’t have left my sick children alone If we had left at the hospital early. Because I had to take care of them. I knew that new theme was very important to me and that’s why I have asked one of my wonderful friend Malika to record a new theme and explain it to me In the evening if possible. I hope you can understand my situation and I would like you to know one more thing I will justify your confidence by getting a high score in the exam. Your sencerely, Gavhar
Dear Mrs
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Zuhra
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Abdukarimova


I am writing to apologize for not being able to participate in the process of explaining a new theme yesterday.

I am
terribly
sorry for missing the most necessary and
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important
lecture.
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I
really
wanted to attend the
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class
.
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But
unfortunately, I couldn’t participate in the
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class
for
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some
reasons.

The reason I couldn’t attend the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
was that we had to go to the hospital
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because
we had all family illness. I couldn’t have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my sick children alone If we had
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left
at the hospital early.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I had to take care of them.

I knew that new theme was
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very
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important
to me and that’s why I have asked one of my wonderful friend Malika to record a new theme and
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explain
it to me In the evening if possible.

I hope you can understand my situation and I would like you to know one more thing I will justify your confidence by getting a high score in the exam.

Your
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sencerely
,

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Gavhar
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IELTS letter You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you didn't attend Say what you will do to make up for it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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