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Dear Sir I am writing to apply for a place on the History course which commences this september at Winstom University. Furthmore, I am 25 years old and I have completed a Bachelor's degree in Theory of History at Canada University, where I received first class honours. Therefore prior to this I was pupil at private grammar school, where I obtained 9 GCSEs as well as two a levels in history, geography, english also mother tongue. What is more, since the completion of my BA I have spent one year working as assistant Historian. This work was exteremly relishable likewise I am presently anxious to particularity by gaining further qualifications before getting on to board on my chosen career in this field. Yours faithfully, Andy

Dear Sir

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september
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Winstom
 University.

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Furthmore
, I am 25 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and I have completed a Bachelor's degree in Theory of History at Canada University, where I received first
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class
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honours
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 prior to this I was pupil at private grammar school, where I obtained 9 Possible spelling mistake found.GasesGCS EsGCSE
GCSEs
as well
 as two a levels in history, geography, Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
also
 mother tongue.

What is more
, since the completion of my BA I have spent one year working as assistant Historian. This work was Possible spelling mistake found.extremely
exteremly
Possible spelling mistake found.relish able
relishable
likewise
 I am presently
 anxious to particularity by gaining further
 qualifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 getting on to board on my chosen career in this field.

Yours faithfully
,

Andy