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Dear Sir I am writing to apply for a place on the History course which commences this september at Winstom University. Furthmore, I am 25 years old and I have completed a Bachelor's degree in Theory of History at Canada University, where I received first class honours. Therefore prior to this I was pupil at private grammar school, where I obtained 9 GCSEs as well as two a levels in history, geography, english also mother tongue. What is more, since the completion of my BA I have spent one year working as assistant Historian. This work was exteremly relishable likewise I am presently anxious to particularity by gaining further qualifications before getting on to board on my chosen career in this field. Yours faithfully, Andy

Dear Sir

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september
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Winstom
 University.

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, I am 25 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and I have completed a Bachelor's degree in Theory of History at Canada University, where I received first
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class
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honours
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Therefore
 prior to this I was pupil at private grammar school, where I obtained 9 Possible spelling mistake found.GasesGCS EsGCSE
GCSEs
as well
 as two a levels in history, geography, Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
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 mother tongue.

What is more
, since the completion of my BA I have spent one year working as assistant Historian. This work was Possible spelling mistake found.extremely
exteremly
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relishable
likewise
 I am presently
 anxious to particularity by gaining further
 qualifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 getting on to board on my chosen career in this field.

Yours faithfully
,

Andy

IELTS letter Write to apply a letter for job

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

124 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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