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I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand.

I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand. 1oDlL

Dear Mr James, I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand. Although, I feel comfortable in the course and so interested in it. But I am work in the morning as a marketing coordinator, Recently I get a lot of dutes that I have to finish as and out of my hand I can attend the classes and do my work professionaly at the the same time. I understand that is bad news but I feel i can attend this course next mounth. I would like to suggest to delay me to join another group in the next month, I think that will be a great solution and I promise you this issue will not occur in the future. I hope that you will agree give me this permission to help me. And thank you in advance. I look forward to your response, Yours sincerely, Mohamed Elshafey

Dear Mr James,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand.

Although, I feel comfortable in the course and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 interested in it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I am work in the morning as a marketing coordinator, Recently I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Possible spelling mistake found.datesdutiesdunesduesduetsdukes
dutes
 that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 finish as and out of my hand I can attend the classes and do my work Possible spelling mistake found.professionalprofessionalsprofessionallyprofessional y
professionaly
 at Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 same time. I understand that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 news This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I feel Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can attend this course next
Possible spelling mistake found.monthmouthMountmountmountsmount h
mounth
.

I would like to The verb 'suggest' is used with the gerund form: "suggest delaying".suggest delaying
suggest to delay
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 another group in the next
 month, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that will be a great solution and I promise you this issue will not occur in the future. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope that you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 give me this permission to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me. And thank you in advance.

I look forward to your response,

Yours sincerely
,

Mohamed Possible spelling mistake found.WelshmanMustafa
Elshafey