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I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand.

I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand. 1oDlL
Dear Mr James, I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand. Although, I feel comfortable in the course and so interested in it. But I am work in the morning as a marketing coordinator, Recently I get a lot of dutes that I have to finish as and out of my hand I can attend the classes and do my work professionaly at the the same time. I understand that is bad news but I feel i can attend this course next mounth. I would like to suggest to delay me to join another group in the next month, I think that will be a great solution and I promise you this issue will not occur in the future. I hope that you will agree give me this permission to help me. And thank you in advance. I look forward to your response, Yours sincerely, Mohamed Elshafey
Dear Mr James,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will
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prevent
me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand.

Although, I feel comfortable in the course and
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so
interested in it.
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But
I am work in the morning as a marketing coordinator, Recently I
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get
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a lot of
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dutes
that I
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have to
finish as and out of my hand I can attend the classes and do my work
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professionaly
at
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the the
same time. I understand
that is
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bad
news
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but
I feel
Did you mean "I"?
i
can attend this course
next
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mounth
.

I would like to
The verb 'suggest' is used with the gerund form: "suggest delaying".
suggest to delay
me to
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join
another group in the
next
month, I
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think
that will be a great solution and I promise you this issue will not occur in the future.
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I
hope that you will
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agree
give me this permission to
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help
me. And thank you in advance.

I look forward to your response,

Yours
sincerely
,

Mohamed
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Elshafey
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IELTS letter I am writing this letter to bring your attention about my issue that will prevent me to going in the evening course these days, It is out of my hand.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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