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You had recently ordered a book, online from a bookseller. The book sent by him was not the latest edition, even though you had paid the money according to the latest edition version.

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You had recently ordered a book, online from a bookseller. The book sent by him was not the latest edition, even though you had paid the money according to the latest edition version. Complain about service of the online site State about the urgency for the latest edition Dear Sir, I am writing to express my concern about my recently ordered book. My friend recommend me that you had a bunch of latest book which it showed in your online.  As a nursing student I choose the latest edition of Nursing Care book 3 instead you delived me the Book 2 which i urgently need that book for my examination next week. I am expecting you to send me the latest edition of the book and I will swnd it back the book. I am requesting for the 50% discount and free delivery of the book. I attach the reciept and item number to this email. Regards, Lee
You had recently ordered a
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book
, online from a bookseller. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
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sent
by him was not the latest
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edition
,
even though
you had paid the money according to the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
edition
version.

Complain about service of the online site

State about the urgency for the latest edition

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my concern about my recently ordered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. My friend recommend me that you had a bunch of
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
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book
which it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
in
Did you mean "you're"?
your
online.  As a nursing student I choose the latest
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edition
of Nursing Care
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book
3
instead
you
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delived
me the
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Book
2 which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
urgently
need that
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book
for my examination
next
week. I am expecting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the latest
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edition
of the
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book
and I will
Possible spelling mistake found.
swnd
it back the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. I am requesting for the 50% discount and free delivery of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
attach the
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reciept
and item number to this email. Regards, Lee
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IELTS letter You had recently ordered a book, online from a bookseller. The book sent by him was not the latest edition, even though you had paid the money according to the latest edition version.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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