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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to complain about the Huy Tu street where I am living after the superstorm happened a few days ago. In the recent times, due to the fact that the superstorm swept our city which damaged numerous constructions. Especially many trees have fallen that makes traffic jam on Huy Tu street. Moreover, this road is very dirty and until now, nobody come there to fix it. As a result, not only citizens stay here cannot go out easily, but also students and workers have to choose another way to go to schools or companies. If this case continues, people will lose more time for movement, even it is so dangerous for children and old people. Furthermore, the environment becomes worse than and a lot of people are able to get sick because this is a place for pathogens multiply. Last but not least, I request the local government to clean the waste, solve this problem as soon as possible and has the policy to support citizen repair the result of the superstorm. I am looking forward to a prompt from your side. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to complain about the
Huy
Tu street where I am living after the
superstorm
happened a few days ago. In the recent times, due to the fact that the
superstorm
swept our city which damaged numerous constructions.
Especially
many
trees have fallen that
makes
traffic jam on
Huy
Tu street.
Moreover
, this road is
very
dirty and until
now
, nobody
come
there to
fix
it.
As a result
, not
only
citizens stay here cannot go out
easily
,
but
also
students and workers
have to
choose another way to go to schools or
companies
. If this case continues,
people
will lose more time for movement, even it is
so
dangerous
for children and
old
people
.
Furthermore
, the environment becomes worse than and
a lot of
people
are able to
get
sick
because
this is a place for pathogens multiply. Last
but
not least, I request the local
government
to clean the waste, solve this problem as
soon
as possible and has the policy to support citizen repair the result of the
superstorm
. I am looking forward to a prompt from your side. Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter write letter to council for the dirty street

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  American English
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192 words
5.5
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