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Student room available. write a letter

Student room available. write a letter AgMjx
I am writing to let you know about an accommodation opportunity for students in your college. I hope it will be helpful for you to provide a decent place of stay for your students. Let me provide more detail about the community. My apartment is located in Richardson, in Greenville Avenue and it is within walkable distance to the university. It is a three-bedroom residence and currently it is occupied by final year graduates in your institution. Out of this, one person will be leaving by end of this month and I would like to rent his room to any scholar from your college. The place will be available from first week of the coming month. I would like the person occupying the area to be clean and mindful of others living in. The apartment should be kept clean always and avoid situations that disturb others in the community. As it is for a student, I am not charging security deposit and the rent will be affordable and negotiable. I hope this place will be apt for anyone in your institute. I look forward to hearing from you.
I am writing to
let
you know about an accommodation opportunity for students in your college. I hope it will be helpful for you to provide a decent place of stay for your students.

Let
me provide more detail about the community. My apartment
is located
in Richardson, in Greenville Avenue and it is within walkable distance to the university. It is a three-bedroom residence and
currently
it
is occupied
by final year graduates in your institution. Out of this, one person will be leaving by
end
of this month and I would like to rent his room to any scholar from your college. The place will be available from
first
week of the coming month.

I would like the person occupying the area to be clean and mindful of others living in. The apartment should be
kept
clean always and avoid situations that disturb others in the community. As it is for a student, I am not charging security deposit and the rent will be affordable and negotiable.

I hope this place will be apt for anyone in your institute. I look forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter Student room available. write a letter

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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