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. Your new neighbour puts their rubbish out in the wrong place, near your home. Write a letter to your new neighbour. You should say: - Who you are and where you live - What the problem is - What you want them to do about it

. Your new neighbour puts their rubbish out in the wrong place, near your home. Write a letter to your new neighbour. You should say: - Who you are and where you live - What the problem is - What you want them to do about it xOjD6
Dear Mr. Karan, I am Umang Patel, residing in House No. 106 next to your house in Global society. I am writing this letter to express my concern with your behaviour on disposing garbage near my house. As you are leaving your rubbish in front of my house for the past one week, it is giving us foul smell when we open our main door. Also, the street dogs dig the rubbish and make a mess around the main gate of our house, which is unsanitary. Moreover, it takes a lot of time and effort to clean up the area and causing health problem to my family and other members of our society. I would like to give you a solution to this difficulty. First, as you have to deposit the dry waste, please throw into the government allocated bins provided to individual houses. These wastages are taken out by council early in the morning. Second, although there is some fee for this service, if you are not ready to pay, I will pay for you. This way both of us will get relief for the current situation. Please cooperate for this so that we will have a good relationship with each other. I hope you understood my problem and will not allow me to take this issue as legal. Yours sincerely, Umang Patel
Dear Mr.
Karan
,

I am
Umang
Patel, residing in
House
No. 106
next
to your
house
in Global society. I am writing this letter to express my concern with your
behaviour
on disposing garbage near my
house
.

As you are leaving your rubbish in front of my
house
for the past one week, it is giving us foul smell when we open our main door.
Also
, the street dogs dig the rubbish and
make
a mess around the main gate of our
house
, which is unsanitary.
Moreover
, it takes
a lot of
time and effort to clean up the area and causing health problem to my family and other members of our society.

I would like to give you a solution to this difficulty.
First
, as you
have to
deposit the dry waste,
please
throw into the
government
allocated bins provided to individual
houses
. These
wastages
are taken
out by council early in the morning. Second, although there is
some
fee for this service, if you are not ready to pay, I will pay for you. This way both of us will
get
relief for the
current
situation.
Please
cooperate for this
so
that we will have a
good
relationship with each other.

I hope you understood my problem and will not
allow
me to take this issue as legal.

Yours
sincerely
,

Umang
Patel
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IELTS letter . Your new neighbour puts their rubbish out in the wrong place, near your home. Write a letter to your new neighbour. You should say: - Who you are and where you live - What the problem is - What you want them to do about it

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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