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Thank you so much for your time, thorough feedback, and follow-up. I am very glad because I was able to take part in your class I this program in Russia. After a year of studying and working together, I can see that a teacher like you is not easy to find. I hope that one day in the future, we will have more opportunities to work together The first time when I started learning Russian, a completely different language from my mother tongue, I was really worried about this. To be honest, I was also a bit afraid of you, a new teacher because, before that, I have not had the opportunity to work with people from other countries like you. However, just a week or two weeks after we started, I was attracted by your teaching method, you always gave us lots of examples, played games, and opportunities to practice. I never forget that you used to talk to my friends and me that don’t be afraid to speak when we felt embarrassed or when our pronunciation was not like a native speaker. You made me realize that it’s ok to make mistakes, the important thing that we have to learn from these mistakes. Moreover, the first time when my friends and I came to Moscow, you spent a lot of your time telling us a bunch of things about where we could buy a good sim card; which supermarket is cheaper and so many things like this. Besides that, you were so enthusiastic when my friends and I had any problem, we could freely ask you about this such as you helped us to translate our math homework; discussed our information lesson…. Thank you for your help this year and I don’t know that it might a bit informal but I have to say that I’m sorry because sometimes I’m didn’t pay attention to our lessons or I didn’t complete my homework on time. But after all, I’m so grateful when I was your student and you were my teacher –the first teacher when I came to Russia.
Thank you
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, thorough feedback, and follow-up. I am
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glad
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I was able to
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take part
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class
I this program in Russia. After a year of studying and working together, I can
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see
that a
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teacher
like you is not easy to find. I hope that one day in the future, we will have more opportunities to work together

The
first
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time
when I
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started
learning Russian, a completely
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different
language from my mother tongue, I was
really
worried about this. To be honest, I was
also
a bit afraid of you, a new
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teacher
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because
,
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before
that, I have not had the opportunity to work with
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people
from other countries like you.
However
,
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just
a week or two weeks after we
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started
, I
was attracted
by your teaching method, you always gave us lots of examples, played games, and opportunities to practice. I never forget that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to talk to my friends and me that don’t be afraid to speak when we felt embarrassed or when our pronunciation was not like a native speaker. You made me realize that it’s ok to
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make
mistakes, the
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important
thing that we
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have to
learn from these mistakes.

Moreover
, the
first
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time
when my friends and I came to Moscow, you spent
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a lot of
your
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time
telling us a bunch of things about where we could
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buy
a
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good
sim card; which supermarket is cheaper and
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so
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many
things like this.
Besides
that, you were
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so
enthusiastic when my friends and I had any problem, we could
freely
ask you about this such as you
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helped
us to translate our math homework; discussed our information lesson….

Thank you for your
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help
this year and I don’t know that it might a bit informal
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but
I
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have to
say that I’m sorry
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because
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sometimes
I’m didn’t pay attention to our lessons or I didn’t complete my homework on
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time
.
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But
after all
, I’m
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so
grateful when I was your student and you were my
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teacher
–the
first
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teacher
when I came to Russia.
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3 paragraphs
350 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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