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This is an invitation letter for the wedding anniversary

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Dear Mrs Jolly I am writing this letter to invite you to our wedding anniversary that we are organizing for evening on 18 June 2021. It has been 5 years since our marriage, so we decided to celebrate it as a party. Such for this reason, I want to see your participation at that day. There will be a lot of guests and my favourite popular singer -George, even. As I hope, it will be a lot of fun. Furthermore, I am going to cook delicious meals and making a party cake, also. There one my secret that I want to share with you is a romantic scene for my husband. For that, I need your help to decorate the scene. You are the best designer in designing scenes as all know. I look forward to your reply. Please contact with me before the anniversary day. With love Susie.
Dear Mrs Jolly I am writing this letter to invite you to our wedding anniversary that we are organizing for evening on 18 June 2021. It has been 5 years since our marriage,
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so
we decided to celebrate it as a party. Such
for this reason
, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
your participation at that day. There will be
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a lot of
guests and my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
popular singer -George, even. As I hope, it will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
fun.
Furthermore
, I am going to cook delicious meals and making a party cake,
also
. There one my secret that I want to share with you is a romantic scene for my husband. For that, I need your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to decorate the scene. You are the best designer in designing scenes as all know. I look forward to your reply.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact with me
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before
the anniversary day.

With
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love
Susie.
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IELTS letter This is an invitation letter for the wedding anniversary

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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