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write a letter of complaint to the residential committee, complain about your neighbors who are always making noise

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to demonstrate my extreme dissatisfaction with the fuss coming from my new neighbors. Firstly, once Taylor resided next door, I could not tolerate the noise that he constantly blasts music for hours and hours. Moreover, he frequently turned on the television at max volume, which drove me insane every single day. Although I requested him several times to quiet down, he just gave me a simple apology, subsequently, he disregarded my complaint. In addition, not only did he throw parties until late, but he also danced and yelled loudly with his buddies. This noise negatively affects me and the neighborhoods as it is necessary for me to have a peaceful place to live and function my duties. I suffer from mental fatigue resulting in me not getting enough sleep to work and fulfill the deadline on time. I feel I have to write to you now to solve this matter, and it does not have to go any further. I recommend that you disclose this ongoing issue to the chairman of the residential committee, as you have the authority to deal with it. Please do what you can to help. I would appreciate your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Nguyen Thi Hong Nhung
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to demonstrate my extreme dissatisfaction with the fuss coming from my new neighbors.

Firstly
, once Taylor resided
next
door, I could not tolerate the noise that he
constantly
blasts music for hours and hours.
Moreover
, he
frequently
turned on the television at max volume, which drove me insane every single day. Although I requested him several times to quiet down, he
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
gave me a simple apology,
subsequently
, he disregarded my complaint.

In addition
, not
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only
did he throw parties until late,
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but
he
also
danced and yelled
loudly
with his buddies. This noise
negatively
affects me and the neighborhoods as it is necessary for me to have a peaceful place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
and function my duties. I suffer from mental fatigue resulting in me not getting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
sleep to work and fulfill the deadline on time.

I feel I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
write to you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
to solve this matter, and it does not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go any
further
.
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I
recommend that you disclose this ongoing issue to the chairman of the residential committee, as you have the authority to deal with it.

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Please
do what you can to
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help
. I would appreciate your cooperation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nguyen
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Thi
Hong
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Nhung
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IELTS letter write a letter of complaint to the residential committee, complain about your neighbors who are always making noise

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