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Write the email to the hotel. Write about: why your company chose to use the hotel in the past why your company is now unhappy with the service what action your company would like the hotel to take

Write the email to the hotel. Write about: why your company chose to use the hotel in the past why your company is now unhappy with the service what action your company would like the hotel to take L3o5r
Dear HH. RR. Department, As General Manager of the Company Leles & Co. , it is with regret that I am reaching you to express our disappointment at the quality of the service we received during the International Conference which we hosted this past weekend at your premises. Although this company has chosen you countless times to be the host of our conferences and training, since you have provided us with top notch services in the past we felt that, on this occasion, the services provided left a great deal to be desired. This time, the service was not what we have come to expect from your establishment; as a result, neither my guest nor our company could enjoy a pleasant experience. The attention received seemed hurried and careless; the personnel in charge was rather inattentive and slow, not only in assisting our guests needs but also in guarantying the proper flow of the conference. e the reason for our choice was to provide a unique and memorable experience at our international colleagues, we were somewhat disturbed at the apparent fall in standards. Might I suggest that, as the manager, it would be advisable for the hotel GM to oversee and doublecheck the preparation of your most important clients personally. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. In the meantime, I really hope you will take my comments with the highest consideration. Kindly, S. M.
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HH
. RR. Department,

As General Manager of the
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Company
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Leles
& Co.
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,
it is with regret that I am reaching you to express our disappointment at the quality of the
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service
we received during the International Conference which we hosted this past weekend at your premises.

Although this
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company
has chosen you countless times to be the host of our conferences and training, since you have provided us with
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top notch
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services
in the past we felt that, on this occasion, the
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services
provided
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left
a great deal to
be desired
. This time, the
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service
was not what we have
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come
to
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expect
from your establishment;
as a result
, neither my guest nor our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
could enjoy a pleasant experience.

The attention received seemed hurried and careless; the personnel in charge was
rather
inattentive and slow, not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
in assisting our guests needs
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but
also
in guarantying the proper flow of the conference.
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the reason for our choice was to provide a unique and memorable experience at our international colleagues, we were somewhat disturbed at the apparent fall in standards.

Might I suggest that, as the manager, it would be advisable for the hotel GM to oversee and
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doublecheck
the preparation of your most
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important
clients
personally
.

I look forward to hearing from you as
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soon
as possible. In the meantime, I
really
hope you will take my comments with the highest consideration.

Kindly, S. M.
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IELTS letter Write the email to the hotel. Write about: why your company chose to use the hotel in the past why your company is now unhappy with the service what action your company would like the hotel to take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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