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Write the complain email to your neighbour

Write the complain email to your neighbour Kllkw
Dear you guy, I am writing this email to complain about the noise at midnight from your house. Actually, I am currently living at 17, L. A Street where is a quiet place before you moved. I am the kind of middle age person who stays near your house. In fact, from 12 p. m to 2 a. m, I usually hear noise in your background. It makes me can not go to bed after a hard-working day. I know you are a young generation, but it is extremely great if you can keep silent at night. You should respect the private time of each other. There is no problem if you open the party at weekend or this one finishes before 10 p. m If I can not go to sleep, tomorrow I cannot focus on my work. Moreover, if this problem continues, your neighbours will report you to the building manager to kick you out even we remind you too many times. I think you can create a party outside like a pub or a restaurant if you will make noise. I would appreciate it if my suggestion are quickly solved. Yours faithfully,
Dear you guy, I am writing this email to complain about the noise at midnight from your
house
. Actually, I am
currently
living at 17, L. A Street where is a quiet place
before
you
moved
. I am the kind of middle age person who stays near your
house
. In fact, from 12 p. m to 2 a. m, I
usually
hear noise in your background. It
makes
me can not go to bed after a
hard
-working day. I know you are a young generation,
but
it is
extremely
great if you can
keep
silent at night. You should respect the private time of each other. There is no problem if you open the party at weekend or this one finishes
before
10 p. m If I can not go to sleep, tomorrow I cannot focus on my work.
Moreover
, if this problem continues, your
neighbours
will report you to the building manager to kick you out even we remind you too
many
times. I
think
you can create a party outside like a pub or a restaurant if you will
make
noise. I would appreciate it if my suggestion are
quickly
solved. Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write the complain email to your neighbour

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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