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Hello guys! I'm Nguyen Minh Quang, a student in class 7G at Khanh Nhac Secondary School - Yen Khanh District- Ninh Binh Provine. In recent years, Climate change has caused serious consequences such as drought, flood, earthquake, tsunami, . . . all over the world and Vietnam has no exception. Climate change directly affects human life, property and become a global issue. Do you know why that happens? The main reason is definitely environmental pollution. Then, what exactly the environment is? The environment is everything that exists around us. The environment can be living or non-living. The environment includes physics, chemistry, and other natural phenomena and without some factors above, humans, animals, the plant cannot survive and develop. Unfortunately, these factors are contaminated dramatically and it badly affects human health, animal life, and tree growth. So protecting the natural environment is very important and it needs acting by everybody on the Earth, not only me but all of you. My school locates in a commune where has been achieved quality of New Rural standard village of Ninh Binh province. People are very conscious of environmental protection: when you visit us, you will see clean and beautiful streets, flowers and trees are planted a lot on the roadside; people classify and dispose of trash in the right place. In 2019, many farmers had diseased livestock but they were followed authorities’ guidance to implement the destruction of that livestock. This action helps the natural environment be protected, clean and beautiful. As a member of my family, a citizen in the village, I have learned and followed the practical actions of my grandparents, parents, and all people around me. Besides, I know about the harmful effects of plastic packaging, so I remind people to limit of using it; try to recycle as well as classify them - Have you seen the lantern - my brother's toy? It's made from beer cans, this puppy's house is made of cardboard; Even the flower pot is made from a pot of cooking oil… I know that my action is very small, but it can contribute to reducing waste, limiting environmental pollution, making life more beautiful. My dear friends, together we can make a green - clean - beautiful environment! Let’s go and action! Thank you!
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has caused serious consequences such as drought, flood, earthquake, tsunami
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all
over the world and Vietnam has no exception. Climate
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directly
affects human life, property and become a global issue.

Do you know why that happens? The main reason is definitely environmental pollution.

Then, what exactly the
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is?

The
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is everything that exists around us. The
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can be living or non-living.
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The
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environment
includes physics, chemistry, and other natural phenomena and without
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factors above, humans, animals, the plant cannot survive and develop. Unfortunately, these factors
are contaminated
dramatically
and it
badly
affects human health, animal life, and tree growth.

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protecting the natural
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is
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and it needs acting by everybody on the Earth, not
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all of you.

My school locates in a commune where has
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quality of New Rural standard village of
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province.
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conscious of environmental protection: when you visit us, you will
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clean and
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streets, flowers and trees
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classify and dispose of trash in the right place.

In 2019,
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farmers had diseased livestock
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they
were followed
authorities’ guidance to implement the destruction of that livestock. This action
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the natural
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be protected
, clean and
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As a member of my family, a citizen in the village, I have learned and followed the practical actions of my grandparents, parents, and all
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, I know about the harmful effects of plastic packaging,
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I remind
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to limit of using it; try to recycle
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as classify them

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the lantern
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my brother's toy? It's made from beer cans, this puppy's
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is made
of cardboard; Even the flower pot
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from a pot of cooking oil…

I know that my action is
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,
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it can contribute to reducing waste, limiting environmental pollution, making life more
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beautiful
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My dear friends, together we can
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clean
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’s go and action!

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