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This is part of a letter you receive from an English-speaking friend, Tim, who is coming on holiday to your country. ''We will be spending a day in your town during our coach tour. Do you think we must meet? If so, what should we do? As this will be my first visit to your area, i want to give your parents a present, can you give me a suggestion? Write your letter (abt 80-100w), suggesting hơ you will spend the day together. DON'T write any addresses.

This is part of a letter you receive from an English-speaking friend, Tim, who is coming on holiday to your country. ''We will be spending a day in your town during our coach tour. Do you think we must meet? If so, what should we do? As this will be my first visit to your area, i want to give your parents a present, can you give me a suggestion? Write your letter (abt 80-100w), suggesting hơ you will spend the day together. DON'T write any addresses. nXxbl

Dear Tim, It was nice to hear from you again. I am really glad to hear that you are coming to our town. . You must tell me the dates and I will try to meet you that day, so that we can go around our town together. I really want to catch up with you. There are lots of things we could do together. I think you'll want to do some fairly active things after sitting on the coach for many days. I think we should go sight-seeing. There are a lot of historical places such as Nguyen Du and Nguyen Cong Tru memorial sites. You can come to see a wide range of artefacts get some really good photos If you want to buy a gift for my parents, I think some flowers would be a great gift. Because my parents both love the colors of the flowers Anyway, write back with the dates soon. I'm really looking forward to seeing you. Love, Kate

Dear Tim,

It was nice to hear from you again. I am You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 glad to hear that you are coming to our town. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me the dates and I will try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you that day, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can go around our town together. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 want to catch up with you.

There are lots of things we could do together. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you'll want to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
fairly
 active things after sitting on the coach for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 days. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we should go sight-seeing. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 historical places such as Nguyen Du and Nguyen Cong Possible spelling mistake found.TrueTryTauThruGRUTRC
Tru
 memorial sites. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a wide range of Possible spelling mistake. 'artefacts' is British English.artifacts
artefacts
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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photos


If you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a gift for my parents, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 flowers would be a great gift. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 my parents both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the colors of the flowers

Anyway, write back with the dates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I'm You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 looking forward to seeing you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

Kate