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This is part of a letter you receive from an English-speaking friend, Tim, who is coming on holiday to your country. ''We will be spending a day in your town during our coach tour. Do you think we must meet? If so, what should we do? As this will be my first visit to your area, i want to give your parents a present, can you give me a suggestion? Write your letter (abt 80-100w), suggesting hơ you will spend the day together. DON'T write any addresses.

This is part of a letter you receive from an English-speaking friend, Tim, who is coming on holiday to your country. ''We will be spending a day in your town during our coach tour. Do you think we must meet? If so, what should we do? As this will be my first visit to your area, i want to give your parents a present, can you give me a suggestion? Write your letter (abt 80-100w), suggesting hơ you will spend the day together. DON'T write any addresses. nXxbl
Dear Tim, It was nice to hear from you again. I am really glad to hear that you are coming to our town. . You must tell me the dates and I will try to meet you that day, so that we can go around our town together. I really want to catch up with you. There are lots of things we could do together. I think you'll want to do some fairly active things after sitting on the coach for many days. I think we should go sight-seeing. There are a lot of historical places such as Nguyen Du and Nguyen Cong Tru memorial sites. You can come to see a wide range of artefacts get some really good photos If you want to buy a gift for my parents, I think some flowers would be a great gift. Because my parents both love the colors of the flowers Anyway, write back with the dates soon. I'm really looking forward to seeing you. Love, Kate
Dear Tim,

It was nice to hear from you again. I am
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really
glad to hear that you are coming to our town.
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You
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me the dates and I will try to
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meet
you that day,
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that we can go around our town together. I
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really
want to catch up with you.

There are lots of things we could do together. I
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think
you'll want to do
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some
fairly
active things after sitting on the coach for
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days. I
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think
we should go sight-seeing. There are
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a lot of
historical places such as Nguyen Du and Nguyen Cong
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Tru
memorial sites. You can
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come
to
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see
a wide range of
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artefacts
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get
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some
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really
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good
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photos


If you want to
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buy
a gift for my parents, I
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think
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some
flowers would be a great gift.
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Because
my parents both
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love
the colors of the flowers

Anyway, write back with the dates
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soon
. I'm
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really
looking forward to seeing you.

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Love
,

Kate
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you receive from an English-speaking friend, Tim, who is coming on holiday to your country. ''We will be spending a day in your town during our coach tour. Do you think we must meet? If so, what should we do? As this will be my first visit to your area, i want to give your parents a present, can you give me a suggestion? Write your letter (abt 80-100w), suggesting hơ you will spend the day together. DON'T write any addresses.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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