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Complaint letter buying book

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the books which I purchased recently from your bookshop. Although, your bookstore is modern, and there are a lot of necessary books. I bought these books yesterday from the branch of your bookshops on Bobur street: "The Lords of the Rings" in Russian and English, "The Canterville Ghost" in English and "War and Peace" in Russian. These book's quality is nice. However, they cost is very expensive. Moreover, "The Lords of the Rings" has no English tracks; there is "Voskresenie " recorded on the disk instead of " War and Peace "; the sounds of "The Canterville Ghost " is of poor quality. I trust you will take my complaint seriously, and make every afford to improve your store is items quality in the future. I would like to pay back these books. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Your faithfully, Customer.
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books
which I
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purchased
recently from your bookshop. Although, your bookstore is modern, and there are
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a lot of
necessary
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books
. I
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bought
these
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books
yesterday from the branch of your bookshops on
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Bobur
street:
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The Lords of the Rings
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in Russian and English,
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The
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Canterville
Ghost
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in English and
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"
War and Peace
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in Russian. These
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book's
quality is nice.
However
, they cost is
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very
expensive.
Moreover
,
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The Lords of the Rings
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has no English
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tracks
; there is
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Voskresenie
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recorded on the disk
instead
of
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"
War and Peace
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"
; the sounds of
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The
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Canterville
Ghost
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"
is of poor quality. I trust you will take my complaint
seriously
, and
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make
every afford to
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improve
your store is items quality in the future. I would like to pay back these
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books
.
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I
look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
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Your
faithfully
, Customer.
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IELTS letter Complaint letter buying book

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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