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Jaanki priyank letter for birthday

Jaanki priyank letter for birthday m9OOd

Hello. . . . Here i am going to say something that i felt after met you. You know this year give me lots of experience towards hard life and some failure of my life. For me my 2021 started with huge losse of my masa after that low score in ielts and some other problems. However, finally you met me in February of 2021. So, I want to say thank you for meet me and give me unconditional love baby. I treasure the love you give to me every day, ; because I can’t survive without them. I’ve never had so much love in my life like this one. I never believed someone would mean so much to me. I felt pure love only exists in fairy tales and soap operas, but that’s not true because you changed my notion about love completely. You gave me a feeling that can only be ordained in gods world. Our journey of life may not be rosy like we always pray for it to be, but we will make a bed of roses and carry it along, to lie on it even if the roads are not smooth. We will be together, for better and for worst, in sickness and in health till eternity. I wish to spend the best moments of my life with you, baby, because you healed my broken heart when you came into my life. I love you jaan-ki.

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You know this year give me lots of experience towards This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
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life
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some
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life
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my 2021 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
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some
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you met me in When specifying a month and year, 'of' is unnecessary: "February 2021".February 2021
February of 2021
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, I want to say thank you for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me and give me unconditional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 baby.

I treasure the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 you give to me every day, ; This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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so
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love
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life
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I
 never believed someone would mean This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much to me.

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I
 felt pure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
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only
 exists in fairy tales and soap operas, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 that’s not true This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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changed
 my notion about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemotiontendernessappreciationtastefondnesslust
love
 completely. You gave me a feeling that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
be ordained
 in gods world.

Our journey of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 may not be rosy like we always pray for it to be, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a bed of roses and carry it along, to lie on it even if the roads are not smooth.

We will be together, for better and for worst, in sickness and in health till eternity. I wish to spend the best moments of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 with you, baby, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you healed my broken heart when you came into my life.

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love
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