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Write a letter to your English friend about the local event which would be useful

Write a letter to your English friend about the local event which would be useful 5LqGn
Dear Akhil, I hope you are happy and healthy. Yesterday, I saw a banner about a local event taking place next month starting November 1st to November 7th, 2021 which is held at Vaibhav Hall at short walking distance from my home. I called the organizer and took down all the necessary details about the event. It includes Theatre Play, a famous Professor would take an hour session about Hindi Basics and Grammar and also fun Games. I am EXTREMELY certain, this event would be very useful as you would get to interact with the local people and get to learn basic Hindi. I would be IMMENSELY happy if you can join this PROGRAM. PLEASE do not worry about the staying arrangements, as you are most welcome to stay at my home. My family is equally excited to meet you after such a long time. GIVE my regards to your family. I am hoping to hear from you soon. Lots of Love, Rincy.
Dear Akhil,

I hope you are happy and healthy. Yesterday, I
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event
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month starting November 1st to November 7th, 2021 which
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Vaibhav
Hall at short walking distance from my home.

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details
about the
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event
. It includes
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Theatre
Play, a
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famous
Professor would take an hour session about Hindi Basics and Grammar and
also
fun Games. I am
EXTREMELY
certain, this
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event
would be
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very
useful as you would
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get
to interact with the local
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people
and
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get
to learn basic Hindi.

I would be
IMMENSELY
happy if you can
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join
this PROGRAM.
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PLEASE
do not worry about the staying arrangements, as you are most welcome to stay at my home. My family is
equally
excited to
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meet
you after such a long time. GIVE my regards to your family. I am hoping to hear from you
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soon
.

Lots of
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,

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Rincy
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your English friend about the local event which would be useful

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  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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