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Write message to the h.r telling him that you will leave

Write message to the h. r telling him that you will leave 1kq3y
Hello dear Im sorry but its impossible to change my current $5000 salary to the $3000 one Im a professional man this is not my level but I really would like to work with you neither of this I can do another job interview here. I can work as an mechanical engineer you can try with me on it, I will do better than this owing to the fact that as I told you previously that I didn’t study Architecture consequently it’s unbelievable to tell me about working as an architecture so please look again at this and I think it will be a good step for your company future it's not an overstatement from me and you will see. I think about this future when you remind me about this letter an will laugh. Please give reply on this if you really believe that I will be a good for any company future as you told me previously.
Hello dear
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its impossible to
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change
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$5000 salary to the $3000 one
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a professional
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man
this is not my level
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but
I
really
would like to work with you neither of this I can do another job interview here. I can work as
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an
mechanical engineer you can try with me on it, I will do better than this owing to the fact that as I
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told
you previously that I didn’t study Architecture
consequently
it’s unbelievable to
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tell
me about working as an architecture
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so
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please
look again at this and I
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think
it will be a
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good
step for your
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company
future it's not an overstatement from me and you will
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see
. I
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think
about this future when you remind me about this letter
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an
will laugh.
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Please
give reply on this if you
really
believe that I will be a
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good
for any
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company
future as you
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told
me previously.

IELTS letter Write message to the h. r telling him that you will leave

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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