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Write message tell the h.r to see about your decline

Write message tell the h. r to see about your decline qagB5

Hello dear Im sorry but its impossible to change my current 5000$ salary to the 3000$ one Im a professional man this is not my level but i really would like to work with you neither of this I can do another job interview here. I can work as an mechanical engineer you can try with me on it i will do better than this because as I told you before that I didn’t study Architecture so it’s unbelievable to tell me about working as an architecture so please look again at this and I think it will be a good step for your company future its not an overstatement from me and you will see. I think about this future when you remind me about this letter an I will laugh. Please give reply on this if you really believe that I will be a good for any company future as you told me before.

Hello dear Possible spelling mistake foundI'm
Im
 sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its impossible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$5000".$5000
5000$
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Im
 a professional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
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but
Did you mean "I"?I
i
really
 would like to work with you neither of this I can do another job interview here. I can work as Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 mechanical engineer you can try with me on Consider adding a comma here.it,
it
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 will do better than this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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told
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that I didn’t study Architecture This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it’s unbelievable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about working as an architecture This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 look again at this and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 step for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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its
 not an overstatement from me and you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about this future when you remind me about this letter Possible typo. Did you mean "an" or "I"?anI
an I
 will laugh. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give reply on this if you really
 believe that I will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 future as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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before
. 