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write letter to team mate who are in hospital

write letter to team mate who are in hospital jbbQy
Dear JohnI'm so sorry to hear that you have Fallen and fractured your leg. I heared this bad news from Jason yesterday. it is extremely unfortunated that you had his accident especially when we are having match next week. I understand that you are admitted in the St John Hospital for one week. I hope you are treatmented care well. Did you get to consult their chief orthopaedician? his speciality is in sports medicine, so he could suggest some specific treatment for you. Let me to share some good news with you. I heard from our couch our University has granted the sport scholarship for your studies. you are should getting a letter shortly. I will visit you at hospital naxt week. best wishesmaryam
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sorry to hear that you have Fallen and fractured your leg. I
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heared
this
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bad
news from Jason yesterday.
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it
is
extremely
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unfortunated
that you had his accident
especially
when we are having match
next
week. I understand that you
are admitted
in the St John Hospital for one week. I hope you are
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treatmented
care well. Did you
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get
to consult their chief
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orthopaedician
?
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his
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speciality
is in sports medicine,
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so
he could suggest
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some
specific treatment for you.
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Let
me to share
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some
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good
news with you. I heard from our couch our University has granted the sport scholarship for your studies.
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you
are should
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getting
a letter shortly. I will visit you at hospital
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naxt
week.
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best
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wishesmaryam
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IELTS letter write letter to team mate who are in hospital

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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