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About my job and about my free time

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Dear David I am live in a London. London is a good place. I live in a house. l am find good friends. I live near the sea. The weather is fabelous cloudy and stromy. I like my job. I work in a office. I am programmer. I started my job five month ago. I like my job. Because in my office I have a lot of friends and salary is very good. Yesterday l went to restaurants with my friends. And we ordered cpicy food and soup. Yesterday we went to the Mountain and we saw a lot of animals. We saw bears and crocodiles. I have a car it buhgatti. Two weeks ago we went to the fishing. l like fishing. We caught lots of fish. Love John!
Dear David

I am
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place. I
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am find
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friends. I
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near the sea. The weather is
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fabelous
cloudy and
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I like my job. I work in
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a
office.
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I
am programmer.
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my job five
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ago.
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I
like my job.
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in my office I have
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friends and salary is
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. Yesterday l went to restaurants with my friends. And we ordered
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cpicy
food and soup.

Yesterday we went to the
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Mountain and
we
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a lot of
animals. We
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bears and crocodiles. I have a car it
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buhgatti
. Two weeks ago we went to the fishing.
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like fishing. We caught lots of fish.

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John!
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IELTS letter About my job and about my free time

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  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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