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About my job and about my free time

About my job and about my free time 2aK6w

Dear David I am live in a London. London is a good place. I live in a house. l am find good friends. I live near the sea. The weather is fabelous cloudy and stromy. I like my job. I work in a office. I am programmer. I started my job five month ago. I like my job. Because in my office I have a lot of friends and salary is very good. Yesterday l went to restaurants with my friends. And we ordered cpicy food and soup. Yesterday we went to the Mountain and we saw a lot of animals. We saw bears and crocodiles. I have a car it buhgatti. Two weeks ago we went to the fishing. l like fishing. We caught lots of fish. Love John!

Dear David

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 office. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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good
. Yesterday l went to restaurants with my friends. And we ordered Possible spelling mistake found.spicy
cpicy
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Yesterday we went to the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Mountain, and
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saw
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a lot of
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saw
 bears and crocodiles. I have a car it Possible spelling mistake found.Bugatti
buhgatti
. Two weeks ago we went to the fishing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterL
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 like fishing. We caught lots of fish.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


John! 