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This letter is a request to waiver the application fee.

This letter is a request to waiver the application fee. aJQVV
To the University Board of Admissions: Thank you for taking the time to read and open this message. University has always been a dream of mine, and being the first in my family to apply to a university abroad, I am still unfamiliar with much of the process. I'm writing this waiver letter to request that the application fee be waived. I'm applying to couple of universities and it's not possible for me to pay the application fees for all of them, so if you could just waive the application fee, that would make my decision to apply to your university a lot more solid. I have no objections. I'll pay the tuition, but I'd like to know whether I'm a good fit, so I'd like to have my profile reviewed by the admissions committee. If I'm a good fit, I'd be delighted to attend your university, but I'll need to get the application fees waived first. Sincerely, Rifayat Hasan Dhaka, Bangladesh +8801990300069
To the
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Board of Admissions:

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University
has always been a dream of mine, and being the
first
in my family to apply to a
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university
abroad, I am
still
unfamiliar with much of the process. I'm writing this waiver letter to request that the
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application
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fee
be waived
. I'm applying to
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couple of
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universities
and it's not possible for me to pay the
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application
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fees
for all of them,
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if you could
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just
waive the
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application
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fee
, that would
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make
my decision to apply to your
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university
a lot more solid.
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I
have no objections.
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I
'll pay the tuition,
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but
I'd like to know whether I'm a
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good
fit,
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so
I'd like to have my profile reviewed by the
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admissions
committee. If I'm a
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good
fit, I'd
be delighted
to attend your
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university
,
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but
I'll need to
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get
the
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application
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fees
waived
first
.

Sincerely
,

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Rifayat
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Hasan


Dhaka, Bangladesh

+8801990300069
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IELTS letter This letter is a request to waiver the application fee.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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