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Write letter complaining about a shampoo that you have got in you letter say when you bought it and name of the products

Write letter complaining about a shampoo that you have got in you letter say when you bought it and name of the products Q5a1L
Dear Sir or madamOn 16 th december, I purchased one of your products and I was very upset to find that it did not work as expected. I have been a very loyal customer of your company for many years and this is certainly not the quality that I have come to expect from you for the past 8 years, I have been purchasing and using your shampoo products and I have been satisfied with the results. However, I recently recieved a shampoo manufactured by your company this letter is to complain about the shampoo had already been used. Another problem was the shampoo's upper paper heavily scratched even before I used it. I was expecting a higher level of service from your company and I really disappointed with how things turned out. I want as is my money back or to have this products replaced with one. I have been using many of your products in the past without any trouble. I hope to continue to have a good relationship with your company. I look forward to hearing from you with a solution to this problem Yours faithfully Lucy
Dear Sir or
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madamOn
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16 th
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december
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purchased
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products and
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very
upset to find that it did not work as
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expected
. I have been a
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loyal customer of your
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company
for
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many
years and this is
certainly
not the quality that I have
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come
to
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from you for the past 8 years, I have been purchasing and using your shampoo
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products
and I have
been satisfied
with the results.
However
, I recently
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recieved
a shampoo manufactured by your
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company
this letter is to complain about the shampoo had already been
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used
. Another problem was the shampoo's upper paper
heavily
scratched even
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before
I
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used
it. I was expecting a higher level of service from your
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company
and I
really
disappointed with how things turned out. I want as is my money back or to have
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this
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products
replaced with one.
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I
have been using
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of your
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products
in the past without any trouble.
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I
hope to continue to have a
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good
relationship with your
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company
.
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I
look forward to hearing from you with a solution to this problem Yours
faithfully
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Lucy
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IELTS letter Write letter complaining about a shampoo that you have got in you letter say when you bought it and name of the products

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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