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You have just come back from a holiday overseas. When you arrived back, you discovered that the airline had lost your suitcase.

You have just come back from a holiday overseas. When you arrived back, you discovered that the airline had lost your suitcase. QV22X

Dear Sir/Madam I writing you for complaining. I just come back to holiday. I arrive back to the airport. Your official have say that my case was lost. I is very angry at this not care for my posession. There are several item of value in my case. There were a new clothes. I bought the clothes for a holiday. I also had a jewellry and some perfume. It was very expensive. There were several souvenir, they are precious for me and remember of my holiday in Fiji like grass skirt and presents. I also had some equipments for the iphone and laptop. I would like you compensate my things. I am send you a list of thing also their cost. I want to get the money as soon possible. Please contact me at 0444888888. Yours faithfully, Gurjeet Singh

Dear Sir/Madam

I writing you for complaining. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to holiday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 arrive back to the airport. Your official have say that my case was lost
.

I Did you mean "am" or "will be"?amwill be
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 angry at this not care for my Possible spelling mistake found.possession
posession
. There are several Possible agreement error. Did you mean "items"?items
item
 of value in my case. There were a new Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "(clothes)"?(clothes)
clothes
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 the clothes for a holiday. I also
 had a Possible spelling mistake found.jewelry
jewellry
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 perfume. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 expensive. There were Possible agreement error. The noun souvenir seems to be countable; consider using: "several souvenirs".several souvenirs
several souvenir
, they are precious for me and remember of my holiday in Fiji like grass skirt and presents. I also
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 equipments for the Possible spelling mistake found.iPhonephoneiPhonesi phone
iphone
 and laptop.

I would like you compensate my things. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you a list of thing also
 their cost.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the money as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 possible. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 contact me at 0444888888.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Greet
Gurjeet
 Singh